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Rush Hour

Dawn Rhodes-Shaw

At eighteen she's anxious in her skin

tight-tongued and lacking laughter.

Walking along Roundhay Road

she bumps into her boyfriend.

He’s leaking testosterone

like an exhaust pipe dripping oil.


Cars jitter as the red light lingers.

Instinct revs through her blood -

one wrong word and her head

is speeding to a parked car bonnet.

Her bag splays open mouthed on the path.

Her cheek bone bounces

from the metal surface.


Trapped at amber

the junction bellows confusion.

Commuters avert their weary eyes.

At green she gathers her guts

from the pavement

and leaves him spluttering in her fumes.

Dawn is a writer from Leeds, now based in Hastings. Her poems appear online in Neologism Poetry Journal, and Words and Whispers Journal, and will be published in the Ey Up Anthology of Northern Writers 3 later in the year. She is currently collecting poems for her first pamphlet. As a screenwriter she is co-writing a six-part comedy series.

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